Developing a Thesis Statement
A thesis statement acts as the focus of your paper, summarizing the main claims and points of your essay in one to two sentences. It serves as a roadmap, giving direction to both the reader and the writer.
At this stage, you should have brainstormed your topic. Now, you must specify your stance and note the evidence that supports it. In short, a thesis doesn’t just describe a topic—it states what you have to say about it and how it is proved.
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The Thesis Formulas
General: Topic + Stance + Points
Argumentative: Topic + Argument + Reasons
Drafting vs. Finalizing
Draft (Missing Topic):
This essay will review the many examples in parenting, education, and the workplace that validate this theory.
Finalized Statement:
When referring to operant conditioning, there are many case studies, specifically within parenting, education, and the workplace, that demonstrate its validity in practice.
Draft (Missing Stance):
Jo March regularly defies social norms and pursues independence.
Finalized Statement:
Jo March, a character from Little Women, is a symbol of feminine strength, as seen in her defiance of social norms and pursuit of independence.
Draft (Missing Points):
Libraries are important and should get more funding.
Finalized Statement:
Because libraries bridge communities by offering accessible information, safe spaces, and professional resources, they should receive increased government funding.